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  • Gavin Runeblade September 29, 2018 at 7:39 am
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    Great flavor, beautiful formatting. Has some issues with language that could be fixed by having a native speaker of English give it a polish.

    My concern is that all of the classes and abilities are far, far too powerful. Even something like the kite shield: disadvantage doesn’t stack so it is just a free +1 AC for everyone wearing heavy armor. Gjof are so easy to earn that a multi-classed cleric could generate infinite spell slots (get 3rd level druid spells, summon woodland spirits for 8 cr 1/4 spirits, murder them to gain 16 gjof which becomes a replacement 3rd level spell +10 left over gjof so you can keep doing it over and over forever yielding infinite power). The Svinfylking’s level 10 class ability is even stronger than gjof since it effects everyone that sees him; potentially hundreds of thousands of people at once if a projected image displays his raging self to a capital city’s population. In general, limits need to be added, specifically maximum amounts.

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